Post by jza1994 on Jan 7, 2015 3:05:52 GMT
Obviously, this is not a major issue, but, when we TS, the personal clause uses the passive voice, and the clan clause uses the active voice. I would recommend changing this so that it is consistent, either:
"You have gained ____.
Your clan has gained ____."
or
"You gained ____.
Your clan gained ____."
I would recommend the second alternative since active voice typically more engages the reader. Fixing this would just take the game a bit farther from the amateur level by eliminating an instance of bad English.
Thank you!
Jaden/jza1994
"You have gained ____.
Your clan has gained ____."
or
"You gained ____.
Your clan gained ____."
I would recommend the second alternative since active voice typically more engages the reader. Fixing this would just take the game a bit farther from the amateur level by eliminating an instance of bad English.
Thank you!
Jaden/jza1994
